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"The Piano Knows Something... by ~xangelpanicx:iconxangelpanicx:



"The Piano Knows Something I Don't Know"

Chords played on the ebony and ivory,
A tale spoken into my ears.
Each word has it's own melody,
Each note has it's own story.
Two destined keys tell the tale of two destined people,
Struck together by the soundtrack to their lives.
Life was as perfect as a scale was smooth,
Before the majors turned into minors.
I can almost read the music like a book,
But how does it end?
I can almost hear the words like a song,
But What do they sound like?
©2008-2009 ~xangelpanicx
:iconxangelpanicx:

Author's Comments

For =Bang-The-Doldrums's contest, the literature bit. Based on the song title "The Piano Knows Something I Don't Know" from Panic At The Disco's new album Pretty.Odd.

The poem is having a song personify a story that the pianist doesn't know how it will end or something like that, heh. :)

I doubt I'll win though, :blush:

Worth a try. ;)

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:iconbang-the-doldrums:
I Love This Part -

I can almost read the music like a book,
But how does it end?


:D Awesomeee, I Think You're The First One To Submit Literature AND Do Something Based On A Song Other Than Nine In The Afternoon Or When The Day Met The Night.
:heart:

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But when the weather changed,
Like fine print, you were hard to read.
Blindfolded, eyes wide open,
Staring through me

:heart:
:iconxangelpanicx:
I thought really hard when I was writing the ending especially, :)

Thanks so much! :hug: I'm glad that I'm the first :D

--
I've Been Here Before A Few Times, And I'm Quite Aware We're Dying.
And Your Hands, They Shake With Goodbyes, And I'll Take You Back If You'll Have Me. :heart:

Blink 182 - Always

Icon drawn by ~PunkChicQueen
:iconpunkchicqueen:
Damn awesome! I toldyou you could do it, but does anyone ever listen to me, no =P

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It's always times like these, when I think of you, and I wonder if you ever think of me, 'cos everything's so wrong and I don't belong living in your precious memories
:iconxangelpanicx:
Noone listens to you because you're gay...

Just kidding lol

--
I've Been Here Before A Few Times, And I'm Quite Aware We're Dying.
And Your Hands, They Shake With Goodbyes, And I'll Take You Back If You'll Have Me. :heart:

Blink 182 - Always

Icon drawn by ~PunkChicQueen
:iconpunkchicqueen:
HOW DID YOU KNOWWWWW!?!

=P
Random moment...

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It's always times like these, when I think of you, and I wonder if you ever think of me, 'cos everything's so wrong and I don't belong living in your precious memories
:iconxangelpanicx:
You're gay? Matthew won't be too happy!

--
I've Been Here Before A Few Times, And I'm Quite Aware We're Dying.
And Your Hands, They Shake With Goodbyes, And I'll Take You Back If You'll Have Me. :heart:

Blink 182 - Always

Icon drawn by ~PunkChicQueen
:iconpunkchicqueen:
.... He'll never know mwahaha, its not like he knows me anyway....

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It's always times like these, when I think of you, and I wonder if you ever think of me, 'cos everything's so wrong and I don't belong living in your precious memories
:iconxangelpanicx:
He does know you, remember when he was talking to you last year?

--
I've Been Here Before A Few Times, And I'm Quite Aware We're Dying.
And Your Hands, They Shake With Goodbyes, And I'll Take You Back If You'll Have Me. :heart:

Blink 182 - Always

Icon drawn by ~PunkChicQueen
:iconpunkchicqueen:
... yeah but hes probably forgotten me, and it wasnt much talking, just a few words exchanged

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It's always times like these, when I think of you, and I wonder if you ever think of me, 'cos everything's so wrong and I don't belong living in your precious memories

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